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Need Advice - Urgent

Hey everyone,

I was thinking about posting the next chapter yesterday but the response on first chapter has been weak so not sure if my writing method has been up to mark.

Thus asking for advice and suggestions on how to make story better if you want me continue or should i Stop because I hoped for more response.

Please comment and let me know on what should I do like include or exclude in upcoming chapters.

I wanted to update regularly but I feedback to make sure everyone likes story.

Please let me know

Also do not hesitate to comment. I am open to all sorts of criticism or adult talks or suggestion or adding more sex scene or removing some or whatever you guys feel like.

Just interact with me so that I can make this better.

Also request to fellow writer and authors to please read my story and provide feedback. Since this is my first time writing a story I need all the help I can get. Also open to any collab with any author or reader if you have any suggestion to make story better.
Heres my insta id if anybody wants to give feedback or wanna talk in private.

https://www.instagram.com/_.the_demon_king__/

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